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  1. Mrsforeman1

    Mrsforeman1 TPF Noob!

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    In light of the recent feedback on my PPing, I reworked this photo. Let the whipping begin.:D

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    Crop this to 4 x 5 to make the framing cheaper and it will be a knockout.
     
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    Mrsforeman1 TPF Noob!

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    :sun:Hey..Traveler! How ya been?

    Thanks for the feedback.
     
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    I saw the other photo, and I like this one much better! I know I'm totally new, but for what it's worth, her skin looks much more natural. I will say that my eye keeps gravitating towards the flowers to right because they match the accessories in her hair.

    She is such a cutie!
     
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    I've been crappy beyond all belief.

    This is, however, a great capture of the little girl.
     
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    skieur TPF Noob!

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    I would tone down the blue just a little, so that it doesn't distract from her face, but I agree. It is a great shot.

    skieur
     
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    Excellent processing! :thumbup:

    NJ
     
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    i agree.
    good shot.
    i didn't see the first one..
    hair thingys are too blue/purple.
    everything else looks natural to me :)
     
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    I didn't see the first one either but I love this shot! The colors are fabulous! The ONLY thing I would criticize is that it'd be nice to see some more of her adorable face!
     
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    Much better:) My only critique is that I really wish she wasn't so dead center.
    I love how colorful it is!
     

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