Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by wwjoeld, May 7, 2004.
Any comments would be most helpful
Right out of Harry Potter...
Nicely exposed B&W. I'd definitely crop some of that foreground, it doesn't add anything to the image. Also - be careful when displaying family names from tombstones. Not that there's anything *illegal* about it, but depending on where you display the image, err on the side of discretion, if that makes sense. I also like the starkness of the image. Nice job!
Interesting shot! I could stand a bit more contrast in it, and that railing in the background is a pity--I could definitely do without that. I think I'd try a closer and lower angle--try and capture some sense of size and power.
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