Right Outside My Window

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  1. TheLogan

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    Just took these today. Please C&C thanks :)

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    1st one does nothing for me. The second one is pretty nice though. It is pretty centered in composition though. A little different crop could really help that shot out. If you cropped so that the blossom was in the top left corner of the shot I think it would be a little more interesting.
     
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    I cropped it and edited it a little, I hope this is what you meant.

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    haha Im about to post the same plant as #2. Nice photo's.
     
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    Actually I think it would work better in the upper left but thats just me.
     
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    I would have cropped it differently...the flowers on the right are distracting.

    And the image looks over processed now...too bright and washed out.
     
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    I'd say #2 looks real nice. Very shallow DoF.

    Yeah the petals look really bright now too.
     

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