RIP - Cemetary Detail. Please C&C

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  1. pborgbarthet

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    I went shooting at the cemetary. The weather conditions were totally wrong (bright and sunny!). Managed this detail which I think looks good.

    Please C & C and any suggestions to how I could improve it.


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    snotshake TPF Noob!

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    I like this! My only complaint is that I feel as if my eyes are stretching towards the corner in order to see the corners of the "cross box."
     
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    Thanks for reply. So you think it's cropped too tightly? I have that feeling too.

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    i like the detail.. but yeah it seems a little tight
     
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    Did you happen to shoot it at a different angle also? I would have gotten a bit lower, but thats just me. I do like it though.

    Billy
     
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    im diggin the barrel distortion.... gives it a little abstracticity to it
     
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    Thanks for the replies.. I like the idea of shooting at a lower angle - next time I'm in the cemetary I must try that :)
     
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    I like the high angle and the crop. Excellent shot.
     

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