Rob & Kat

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  1. ShutteredEye

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    My best friend and his wife commissioned me on a impromptu Christmas Card shoot. Here are a couple of their favorites from the session:

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    What do you think?
     
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    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    What? No replies? OK... I'll go.

    I do like the first image. I suggest: 1) A bit more off the top, so the top of the hedge does not show. 2) Do a bit of general retouch to lighten the shadows under the eyes, and 3) add a bit of vignette. Just some suggestions.

    The second image is cut perfectly in half by the horizon line formed by the top of the hedgerow. So I favor the first image, even without Christmas props.

    I hope this helps.

    Pete
     
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    Thanks Pete.

    Not my strongest work I don't think. But usable just the same.
     
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    These are nice.
    like the backgrounds and they add to the xmas feeling.
     
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    I agree - I would crop the first one so the top of the hedge doesn't show
     

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