Rock bed

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by BrettG, Feb 26, 2005.

  1. BrettG

    BrettG TPF Noob!

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    Pardon the focus, I'm still trying to get the hyperfocal point down, and I didn't do such a hot job in this picture :p

    Original picture, which I'm not too fond of
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    Cropped it like this and thought it looked better with my shadow at the top:
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    Thoughts?
     
  2. craig

    craig TPF Noob!

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    I think the cropped version is much more effective. I like the shadow areas. May be a little saturation to bring out some color.
     
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    i find the shadow distracting, however w/o that, it loses all it's focus. More contrast in the rocks would help bring out more interesting features perhaps?
     

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