Rose (The Reshoot)

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  1. Trenton Romulox

    Trenton Romulox TPF Noob!

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    Hey everyone, this is a reshoot of the rose that I shot yesterday. I set up the lighting very similar (held me a flashlight), but set the f/stop to 22 rather than 2.8.

    Rose, The Reshoot:
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  2. jstuedle

    jstuedle No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Very big improvement! Good work with just a flashlight.
     
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    Much better! Did your sister mind you taking another rose?
     
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    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    A vast improvement over yesterdays. Well done.
     
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    A big improvement indeed. But you can still improve upon this shot. The edges of the petals are blown out, there's too much stem, the foreground light is too harsh (it should be brighter but more even), and the foreground shadows are distracting.
     

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