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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by wrbphotograhy, Jun 16, 2008.

  1. wrbphotograhy

    wrbphotograhy TPF Noob!

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    New to this forum looking for some extra criticism/critiques.

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    Thanks!
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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    C&C per req: I like the subject and the composition, but there's too much contrast for my taste. As well, the lower part appears rather soft, detracting from the overall image.
     
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    jedithebomber TPF Noob!

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    I agree with above, too much contrast, a few grey tones would be nice, and a bit more DOF. The composition looks nice, perhaps try a re-shoot if possible.
     
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    abraxas No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Looks fine to me. The line coming up and to the left from the dog's back may be a bit distracting.
     
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    i like it, the high contrast and softness works for me. makes it more abstract.
     
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    Good composition and I really like the high contrast. The OOF background shapes are a bit disruptive though.

    Regards, Tony
     
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    wrbphotograhy TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for all the replys! I can't re-shoot since it was just a random car but i do have a few others I could tweak. What is and OOF background?
     

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