Runaway Bride

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by rully, Jul 7, 2009.

  1. rully

    rully TPF Noob!

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    hi to all...

    this is my first time posting here, and i want to share something at my first post.

    this picture taken at shelter bus in Jakarta, Indonesia.

    my gears are :

    canon EOS 20D
    Canon EF 24-105mm f/4 L IS USM

    i'm newbie at photography world, so please need your critique and suggestion.


    regards,
    Rully


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  2. 2003protege

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    To me, size-wise she is a bit lost in the scale of the other objects in the photo. Otherwise, I love the composition--the contrast and highlights.
     
  3. gopal

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    since she is close to the camera, she attracts full attention....only improvement is the distracting tilt on the buildings, that has to be straightened. excellent photo.
     
  4. rully

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    many thanks for you guys input.
    from my personal opinion, i hate the sky. because when i took it, sky so cloudy.
     
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    HeY iTs ScOTtY TPF Noob!

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    fix the tilt on the buildings??? lol that would make no sense.
     
  6. rully

    rully TPF Noob!

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    how can i fix the tilt on the building? :D
     

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