Runaway Bride

[rully]

hi to all...

this is my first time posting here, and i want to share something at my first post.

this picture taken at shelter bus in Jakarta, Indonesia.

my gears are :

canon EOS 20D
Canon EF 24-105mm f/4 L IS USM

i'm newbie at photography world, so please need your critique and suggestion.


regards,
Rully

 

[2003protege]

To me, size-wise she is a bit lost in the scale of the other objects in the photo. Otherwise, I love the composition--the contrast and highlights.

 

[gopal]

since she is close to the camera, she attracts full attention....only improvement is the distracting tilt on the buildings, that has to be straightened. excellent photo.

 

[rully]

many thanks for you guys input.
from my personal opinion, i hate the sky. because when i took it, sky so cloudy.

 

[HeY iTs ScOTtY]

fix the tilt on the buildings??? lol that would make no sense.

 

[rully]

how can i fix the tilt on the building?