running water

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  1. Alex_B

    Alex_B No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    guess i spent too much time with the technical aspects here .. so composition suffered a bit ;)

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    Not this time, my friend.

    Neither shot does anything for me.

    You sacrificed composition!
     
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    thanks for the honesty! Always appreciated as you know!

    And as I mentioned in the post .. I myself had severe doubts regarding composition.
     
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    I think that # 1 is beautiful.
     
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    The water looks beautiful in both...but the overall images don't do anything for me either. What stands out to me, over the comp, in #2 are the rocks in the right foreground. Something about them looks unnatural...especially the large round boulder.

    cheers :)
     
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    a crop of the right hand side of pic 1 might work, seeing as how you dont mind if people edit your work, maybe something liek this.

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    as far as the second one goes there is nothing really in it besides water.
     
  7. Alex_B

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    Thanks .. you all more or less helped me to see what I suspected, but could not see clear enough since I was to biased by the charm of that palace ... which unfortunately I did not manage to capture, getting lost in technical details.


    Crobo ... that is certainly a better crop! Thanks for the effort.
     
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    Nice work. What an awesome sky!! I won't tell you what you already know.. but wow.. what a sky!! We don't get that too often in Georgia! #1 is close to being perfect!! You weren't too far off. Can't wait to get to know you all better on here!
     

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