Hmm...first of all, this might wanna be in the Portrait section. And also, the image just seems really busy to me, and there's a lot of shadow on her face. Did you take any other versions of this?
Not the best I have seen from you.. but... I would still gladly call it my own .
The thing I really like about this image though, is how her 'shadow' has the slight bit of colour on her dress.