Sall the Spider (C&C)

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Flems, Sep 27, 2009.

  1. Flems

    Flems TPF Noob!

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    This was just a spider that my roommates had found on our porch. Her new name is Sally.

    Any C&C's are welcomed. I suggest viewing it as large as possible.

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    At first, I wasn't 100% satisfied with the composition, but I've come to realize that this image definitely portrays the life of a spider. The can spend days in the dark, hiding waiting for the perfect meal, and when one arrives they emerge from this darkness into the life-bringing light.

    Thanks for looking!
     
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  2. kundalini

    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Unfortunately, your subject is completely lost for me in this image. The blowouts dominate the image.

    My only suggestions would to try and stop down this lens quite a bit and use an external flash to separate the spider from the poorly positioned background.



    BTW, I was expecting a male spider named Sall.
     

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