Screwy Squirrel C&C

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Provo, Nov 16, 2009.

  1. Provo

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    I took these this morning I promise I wont cry if anyone is harsh with the comments ;)

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    They're cute, but the second one is waaay too dark, IMO. Boost the shadows and midtones a fair bit, and give the highlights a little nudge.
     
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    I know its hard to do without a 10 thousand mile zoom lens or without scaring off your subject but I would have liked these a lot better if you would have cut in closer to the subject
     
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    As said, #2 is too dark

    There is too much null space too.
    Try apply an Unsharp mask to your images
    also leave the text out, Unless you learn to use typography in such a way which it does not obstruct the Photograph too much.

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    as you seee, The watermark doesn't stand out as much and is very intimate with the image thus making it harder to remove.

    I also Notice I have over-Sharpened the image and blown the belly
     
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  5. Provo

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    Good tips and the edited version does look better.
     

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