SDPG Ultimate Shootout 3 model shots

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    I took these shots at a local workshop event with the SoCal Photography Group. I had a blast and think I took some great shots with the help of all the models and MUAs. It was my first time working with actual models, and still early attempts at people photography. Here's a small selection of some of my favorites:

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    the eye's in #5 go right through me....

    nice work...
     
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    Overall I think you did a good job but some pointers:

    #1: Her left hand comes out of nowhere.
    #2: I kinda like it while a wide angle is usually not a good choice for model photography unless you really want that distorted effect.
    #3: don't like her expression
    #4: somehow my favorite. I like her expression and looking down.
    #6: somehow unsharp and the eyes are to far to the side.
    #7: The combination of pose and dress does not look too good.
    #8: Nice but having her a bit more left in the frame would work better as composition IMHO
    #10: In this one her body is too straight to the cam IMO.
    #11: I like the concept but she should have turned her body more towards the camera IMHO.

    I know its very difficult to get decent shots during workshops when you compete with other photographer to get the attention of the model.
     

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