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  1. Zeitgeist

    Zeitgeist TPF Noob!

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    Hand held shot of an odd decoration in an outside patio at Foster's Market, Durham, NC

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  2. Andrea K

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    i think it would be better if it wasnt so centered, and maybe it would look better if it was set off to one side with a lot of blank space to one side of it to portray some type of lonely feeling. also, i know its not ur fault but the wall is sooo ugly. the color is also a little dark

    maybe you could reshoot it with a tripod? good attempt :D
     
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    I think a bit of work in PS on the curves and a different crop might help spice this photo up a bit. But I do like the ide of it. :)
     
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    I like the shadows here... so mystical... and I agree with Andreag about the crop
     
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    :) Nice photo! There should be more chairs on the walls around here to snap: it's a fun and intriguing image. Would go 'ditto' on the cropping though.
     

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