Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Verbal, Mar 13, 2005.
I *KNOW* it's not perfect, so tell me what to do differently. =)
The composition looks good to me but it could do with being lightened up a little bit. I'm no expert though!
ditto - it does look rather dark.
I would like to see the base of the tree in the foreground, cutting it out makes it look like it's floating there to me.
was the green colour cast intentional? if not, a bit of photoshopping would fix it (or a filter on-camera).
I agree that the image is too dark, and the foreground tree does appear to be floating.
A good picture nonetheless, and one to learn from!
What do I know?
The horizan looks like it tilting down to the right.
You might try this in black and white too!!! I bet it would look pretty good. I like the color in this though, but seems a bit dark as stated above.
I agree, this would probably make a nice B&W, since you have good contrast, it just needs a bit of lightening overall. The greenish tinge in this image is a little offsetting. I like the composition, and the slant of the building. Very nice lines. :thumbup:
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