Second photo to upload for C&C

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  1. ndredsox

    ndredsox TPF Noob!

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    Hello again everyone!
    I spent the day at Crown Hill Cemetery doing some GeoCaching and took about 300 pictures. It was very overcast and pretty much a crappy day.

    Anyway, I took this one picture that I thought was pretty good, but wanted to see what you thought.

    This is a pathway into the woods thats serves as a memory gardens area.
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    Good use of leading lines, but the image is really lacking a main subject. The path guides the eye perfectly, but to what? Additionally, the image is somewhat mid-tone rich and could use a contrast increase.
     
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    Its a path to nowhere. Generally when I see a shot like this I like to see it lead somewhere.
     
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    If you see the right turn that the path takes, there is a bench that right at the end. I was going to include that in the picture, maybe I will revisit this shot this week.

    Thanks for the comments!
     

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