Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by cso, Jul 19, 2004.
Let 'er rip v 2.0
I like the DOF and the colors here, but why this is one picture??
They're supposed to have a similar mood of isolation and anxiety...did I miss?
no no no this is ok I got it But why there is a white place around it... Crop it or, if you really want a frame... make it black. The seriousness of those photos needs it, IMO
To be honest, I don't know where the white came from...it's not in the original file :?
maybe you added this (quote) before an inmage by accident??[/quote]
looks like some pretty good stuff, great lighting
it's a shame the images are so small
I think the photos are good individually but they don't look right as one image like that. Perhaps putting a small black border around the three might give it more impact. Or you could put a black border around each image individually then put the three images together.
Thanks very much everyone...very valuable feedback...
I think that I agree with pomme...I'm going to separate the images and treat them as 3 separate images in a series rather than one. The proportion was kinda bothering me to begin with, and now that I realize that it creates framing issues (2 sets of comments) I'll ditch the single image concept.
I went back and took a look at the file that I dumped onto photobucket and realized that the white space WAS there...somehow between photoshop and shrinking the image to fit, I added white...
More than one subject in the same frame never works. I can't see the esoteric intrinsic values you're trying to convey. On my monitor, the picture is chaotic, busy, under exposed, and out of focus.
This appears to me as being 3 snapshots stacked one over the other.
I like your first post much better.
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