Second time studio :-) (NSFW)

silversprej

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Yesterday I played around in the studio with my best friend modelling. It was the first time I did the lighting myself. Any comments and critique is much appreciated!

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The lighting is very nice, well done.
 
Nice setup. The cross-processed look in the last two photos is an interesting style for this.

In that last photo, which way is up? Is it to the left? The motion in that photo is disorienting, but not in a bad way.
 
You did a great job with the lighting.

I agree, the last one generates the most interest with the movement. I like it very much.
 
Great stuff. I think a small black border might help the presentation, but wonderful lighting throughout!
 
yea the lighting is these is great. Very attractive subject too.
 
Thanks a lot! I totally agree with you about the last one being the best.

Im really glad you like my work, but I would also very much appreciate some honest opinions about what I could have done better.
 
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Thanks a lot! I totally agree with you about the last one being the best.

Im really glad you like my work, but I would also very much appreciate some honest opinions about what I could have done better.
never shot in a studio nor did lightning so i can't give a direct advice, but noticed in the third photo the most illuminated side of her body (her right side, on the viewer's left) tend to become as white as the background which may be a bit distracting from the shape of her body.
not a critical one tho, pretty slight i'd say.
well done anyway, good composition and lights. and lucky to have a good model that could model, sometimes you see some nicely made portraits of subjects that can't stand in front of a camera.
 

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