second try

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  1. cypilk

    cypilk TPF Noob!

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  2. MDowdey

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    good shot again!!


    try upping the contrast at you might have a winner



    matt
     
  3. cypilk

    cypilk TPF Noob!

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    ok..how about this/...

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  4. MDowdey

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    gettin there dude!!!

    try to focus on one flower in particular...


    md
     
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    i agree there needs to be a great depth affect to really pull this one off.
     
  6. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    This is a nicely composed image; I wish it weren't cut off at the top, though. And yes, you're *almost* there - a little more contrast, please. ;)

    Nice!
     

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