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  1. errant_star

    errant_star TPF Noob!

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    After a long ... loooong day of Antique shopping with my mother and 3 children we took the backroads home and discovered this field and old clapboard shack just after a rain.

    I'm not sure if I like the colours or the black and whites better but I think I'm leaning towards the colour ... I've given you a bit of both anyways ...

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    here's the colour version of #2 for Ferny

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    Enjoy ... all comments and constructive crit appreciated

    Jen
     
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    ferny TPF Noob!

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    *like a leopard on speed he pounces upon the thread*

    All stunning work. Better and better!
    The second one is the best I think, but I'd love to see it in colour! It'd look great on a wall. Great textures and "oldie" feel to them.
     
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    damn nice work Jen! these are all great. i'm undecided as to which i like best; i side with ferny, then i lean towards the last. you're becoming quite the photog! :thumbup:
     
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    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nice scene, I like the last one best, great choice of composition.
     
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    ditto. great shots!
     
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    Wonderful! :thumbsup:
     
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    "the colour version of #2 for Ferny" stands out for me. Amazing subject and good eye!!! The color seems muted. Let us know if this was your intention. If not; I would kick in some saturation and or color correction.
     
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    I like the first the best and the last pic second best. Great shots!
     
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    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Wow, I like all the versions! Good colors/tones, lines & shapes, and grain :thumbup: :thumbup:
     
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    Wow ... thanks for all your kind words and constructive criticism ... :blushing:


    Craig - it was not my intention for the muted colours .. I'll have a go at it later on and try to fix it up.

    Thanks again everyone :mrgreen:
     
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    if you photoshop, you might try adding a "o brother where art thou" golden look to it...

    i like 4... i think i'd like 2 better if you cropped a bit closer to the house on the right side.

    all great photos though... l337 ;)
     
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    Real nice all. The black and white versions are my favorites. Beautiful.
    --A
     

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