selective coloring and a sunset

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  1. lmyamen

    lmyamen TPF Noob!

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    thought i would share a pic i took at my parents house. I like how it turned out, i think the selective coloring ads a nice effect to the sunset.

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  2. kundalini

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    Somethings odd to me.

    There's definetly a tilt to the right. The lawn furnture on the left is distracting to me.

    I'm looking into the sun, but the shadows on the back of the house say differently.

    Flash was used by the tale-tell reflection on the water pump. Maybe tone that down a smidge.

    I'm not particularly a fan of selective coloring, but since you've done it (quite nicely), I think bring the green grass a bit further towards the container and maybe boost the color/saturation of the one bud.

    I like your composition and really diggin' the sun rays man.

    Thanks for sharing.
     
  3. Yahoozy

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    i really like this one i havent thought of this =P
    but i agree the tilt and the furniture are distracting
    fix that though and your all good
    great work man
     
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    I love this photo. If I were you, I'd get rid of the electricty line on top.
     
  5. MisplacedAngler

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    Great idea. I agree with most the other suggestions, but a very cool picture still.
     

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