Self-Portrait Attempt

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  1. Trenton Romulox

    Trenton Romulox TPF Noob!

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    Hey everyone!
    I decided to give a go at a self-portrait today. Any critique is greatly appreciated! Lay it all out there, I'm not afraid of some hardcore criticisms. :]

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    out of focus?
     
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    red x for me
     
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    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Yeah, the right elbow is spot on, but the face is out. Movement?
     
  5. Trenton Romulox

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    Yeah, okay, how about stuff beyond the focus. Self-portraits are an ├╝ber-b$#& HAHA. So, beyond the obvious focusing...anything else to work on?
     
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    When looking out of the shot put the space where the person is looking, not behind. IMO.
     
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    Skin tones are off.
     
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    your head looks photochopped into the picture cause of that shadow covering your neck.
     

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