self portrait C&C

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  1. Kofman13

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    portrait of myself

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    Take your hand off your mouth. Looks like you have morning breath and are embarrassed lol.

    Other than that, the shadows are too dark...but I think some PP can fix that. I like the composition.
     
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    i guess it was a thoughtful pose gone wrong
     
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    Not wrong, I can tell what you wanted to accomplish with this, I think the hand on the chin, instead of covering your mouth, might be a tad better.

    But who cares, it's a self portrait, if that's how you perceive yourself, cool :thumbup:
     

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