self portrait - critique please

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  1. kssingthlipless

    kssingthlipless TPF Noob!

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    taken for a photography class project. i liked how it turned out so i thought i would share it with you all. i would have liked to add a border in photoshop but its not working at the moment. :cry: anyways...


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    thanks to all that looked, thanks to all that critiqued.
     
  2. sukhoon2

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    It doesn't look like either of the subjects is in good focus. I know it's hard to take a photo when you're not behind it, controlling everything. But I like the idea. Good luck on your project
     
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    Looks depressing
     
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    I thought so, too, and that is its strongest point. If an image can evoke an emotion, then it's working.
     
  5. thomash

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    I find the background kind of destroys this.
    It would also be nicer with more focus

    Thomas
     

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