self portrait

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  1. Onyx

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    any suggestions? OTE
     
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    Aside from removing whatever is looking slightly white at the top of the image I think it's really good. I especially like the way you have toned it blue for your avatar. Nice work, very arty, very cool.
     
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    thanks. yeah in other versions of this pic i have it removed but i dont know where i put them. besides that, are there any other suggestions?

    oh and some additional info. my light source was a flashlight with some tissue for a diffuser(im too poor for real lighting) any ideas on how i could make the lighting better?
     
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    perhaps a little less noise in there and a bit more in focus, and lastly perhaps a little closer to the subject, being you...heh
    but I like the idea here, keep workin on it
     
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    I love images like this. SP's are some of my favorite images to view and capture.

    I have to agree about distration at the top of the image, but I think there needs to be some slight cropping anyway so it doesn't really matter. Also there is a pure white spot on the chest. Now in some cases this isn't such a bad thing, but in this case it is, as it is rather big.

    Otherwise I realy like this photo.
     

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