Senior Picture of Ashley

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  1. jlykins

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    This was done with a Single Sb900 through a trigrip diffuser camera right. I was shooting TTL. I had -.7 ev dialed in the camera and +.3 dialed in the flash. It made the clouds go super dramatic.

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    nice shot.

    only nits I have (hope you don't mind)
    To the left of her face there is a halo where it's just a bit brighter than everywhere else (I think it's also there by her leg, but I could be seeing things)

    Other thought is if you could have been a little above her instead of a little below that might have been a little better,

    again, good shot.
     
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    i see both halos too.
     
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    First thing I noticed was the halo. Did you do a Gaussian blur layer and mask? That would make sense.
     
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    Serious halo.
    Very close to a very nice photo. Needs a bit more pop. Bring the exposure up a bit.
     
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    Halo was what I noticed too. Did you dodge her to bring her out of the background a bit? if so you'll probably want to go back and not dodge right to the edges, it's just too distracting the way it is.

    Nice shot, though.
     

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