Senior Portrait from November

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  1. Parkerman

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    Here is a senior portrait I did back in November. I think it was one of the best from that shoot that I did. Conditions that day were alright, but not great.

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    Just wanted to see what others thought about it.

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    the face is well lit and sharp with plenty of detail in the eyes, what i would criticise is the sharp detail in the wall to her right which i cant help looking at
     
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    Her face seem really red/flushed. Particularly on the right side of her face under both eyes. It seems distracting and was the first thing my eye was drawn to.
     
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    I think the lighting is fine.

    I'd like to see a different pose, rather than her back flat against the wall.

    I do like the setting and clothing choice. Good expression.

    Nice goin'!

    -Pete
     
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    Is your monitor calibrated?
     
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    Thanks everyone,

    There were other poses done that they ordered, but this was their favorite.. and my favorite from the shoot as well.. So it will be the only one I will probably post up.
     

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