ThunderAndRain
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- Maine
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A couple of thoughts: (1) Like so many other senior sessions this doesn't tell me anything about her, other than that she's an attractive young lady. What are her interests? Is she on any school teams or clubs? What does she do in her spare time? I think this could have been much stronger had you incorporated other aspects of her life.
(2) On the technical side, all of these desperately need fill light. The bright/blown backgrounds pull the eye away from the young lady; a couple of stops of fill would have dropped the backgrounds down, brightened her face and put a nice catchlight into her eyes. That said, while rather too thin for my taste, you've maintained good control on your focus and DoF.
Hello! Welcome!Please let me know any thoughts you have.