Senior portraits

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Anderson-Photography, Sep 27, 2008.

  1. Anderson-Photography

    Anderson-Photography TPF Noob!

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    Snaps of some high school seniors.
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  2. Parkerman

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    On the first one.. Did you crop it that tight or was that the original way you framed it? A little tight against her arm makes the picture feel a bit cramped to me.

    2nd shot is good, if you could.. brighten her eyes up some.
     
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    Your models are easy on the eyes which always helps in making a photo. The first model looks kind of tight, though. Was she nervous?

    As far as lighting they look well done to my noob eyes. Also, the pp looks strong, but not overly-done.

    If I were a mom or dad paying for these shots, I'd be happy with what I got. You made the girls look pretty, yet sophisticated. Very good, sir.

    BTW, don't you think the second girl looks just like a teenage version of Angelina Jolie?
     
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    Wow both beautiful girls and great captures! The one thing that stands out for me though, is in the first image if you follow the bridge of her nose up toward her eyes there is an odd combination of highlights/shadows that I can't quite figure out. It could be my monitor though!!
     

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