Senior Portraits

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by trm6346, May 27, 2010.

  1. trm6346

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    I like the lighting on the first one...nice and even. I don't care for the shadowed face caused by the backlight in #2.

    For both of these, you might want to clone out some of the stray hairs in front of her face, and the fly-aways. I would probably whiten her teeth a bit as well...they look almost orangey (which I realize isn't your fault). And, she has great eyes, but they're not really popping here. They could stand to be sharpened a bit I think.

    All just My opinions...keep up the good work!
     
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    did she pay for these?
     
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    she has good features but needs a good makeup.
     
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    lol, no. She's my daughter.
     
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    I agree on the teeth thing, lotta yellows and oranges in there.

    On the first one though, her upper lip needs to be lightened up a bit as it looks like she has a slight mustache due to the shadows.

    But I'm a huge fan of the second shot, I love how the back light frames the face. Much bueno, IMO.
     
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    DAMN! Feel bad for you having to keep the guys anway.... :lol:

    But on a serious not it looks like there is strands of hair in the first pic and a few other little things that bother me. Otherwise great pics.
     
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    All good points.
    Too many stray hairs to do anything about. Not gonna bother.
    I'm the first to admit that my post prod skills are awful.
    I work my tail off getting the light and exposure as well as composition and then the end result fails.

    Anyway, Here's a second stab at the pic above and a few more from the set.
    See if it's any better.
    (on a side note, this sites hosting software seems to soften the pics up somewhat...don't know if I'm seeing things or not but the pics in my computer look much much sharper)
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    Well done sir. And, indeed your daughter is beautiful...congratulations on her graduation.
     

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