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  1. JimmyJaceyMom

    JimmyJaceyMom TPF Noob!

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    I know, I cut his toes off darnit! No one is more mad about that that me. ;)

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    this one has a watermark on it cause I used it on my blog, please ignore.
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    I like 'em all, except #5!!! Great job! Not to fond of #5 though, I would have probably left that one out, doesn't go with the flow.

    On a tangent, I haven't seen quite a sepctacular bowl cut in quite a while!:D
     
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    Garbz No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Like number 1. It really shows the car without showing the car. It's all about the person but it has some excellent depth.

    On an equal tangent, that is quite the moe he's got there too.
     
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    JimmyJaceyMom TPF Noob!

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    Buzzerker - lol I showed that last one because he has a different expression than the others I chose to show and I figured someone would say that he looks miserable. But I did get him to smile, ;)

    Garbz, thanks. That's my favorite one that first one. When they wanted a car incorporated I thought, oh no! That's a big prop! I wasn't sure what I would do with it. I don't know enough about cars to know what the things are that you would most definately want to include without takign the attention from the real subject. I'd like to try again someday.


    And you guys about the hair.. lol! My senior picture I had blonde bangs and the rest of my hair was black. :blushing: That's part of the fun of looking back at those types of photos though. ;)
     
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    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    He's got something on his upper lip...maybe you should clone that out.

    :lol:

    Great series. :)
     
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    kellylindseyphotography TPF Noob!

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    Great job! My faves are 1 and 3.. I dislike the last one also, but like his smile.. I just don't like the crop of it.. but I think he will like it because of his expresion. He looks like he was a tough subject! I'm laughing and his mini man mustache *giggle*
     
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    See now number 5 is my favorite! Weird...:lol:

    I like the angle and the crop - but I am a fan of weird angles, focus etc.

    I think you did a great job! The only thing I would say is that his hands look a little too posed or not very masculine in number 2. it may just be personal preference - i usually have them stick their hands in their pockets or something like that! :wink:
     
  8. JimmyJaceyMom

    JimmyJaceyMom TPF Noob!

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    Big Mike - :) lol. thanks.
     
  9. JimmyJaceyMom

    JimmyJaceyMom TPF Noob!

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    kelleylindsay - thanks. yeah that crop is weird I have a bad habit of stying to stick with thirds. I have to knock that off. He was actually a very well mannered young man that took body direction well, he just seemed to make the same expression a lot. I had to tell a few jokes to get him to crack a smile. ;)



    butterfly girl - goood thinking on the hands in the pockets, I think I was drained by this time it was at the end. I should have thought about that! Thanks for the suggestions and comments. :)
     
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    SrBiscuit TPF Noob!

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    agreed...nice shots, but see if you can PS out that dirt on his lip. :D
     
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    I like #5. Who's paying for the pictures anyway...probably Mom, and she wants to see a smile. #2 is great, but I'd like to see him pull his head back a bit. His neck looks kind of like a turtle.
     
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    I like the use of the car in the first pic to create depth, very cool

    Nice pictures.
     

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