Third time hi,
personally I find the sepia too strong, too much on the pink side, and the sky is too blown out. But Andy, our lost prophet, likes it, and others will, too, so my opinion and tastes are just mine and you need not worry.
mmmm, im not that good at photoshop, honestly. What the hek im a newbie to all this. Im just 17 and this is my first year of photography. So anything you say is help for me! The sky is too high, ill modify it!