series of 6 photo project

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  1. MiKaLa119

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    Hi everyone! I have this photo project for class about sequencing/portrait. I decided to do something with my grandma. She's senile and over 80 annnd still goes through the whole makeup and jewelry thing everyday! soo since im in a film photo class, I scanned the images. The original prints DO look better, but I'm looking for overall critique. Im also having problems with contrast! I dont know if you can tell in these scanned copies, but if you can - looking for comments on the contrast. I'm going to the darkroom today to redo #3 - the bottom right is really blown out, and I cant seem to get it right! Also redoing #1 and maybe #2 for a little more contrast. anyway here it goes:


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