Series of shots from today. C&C please

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  1. TylerF

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    Got the chance to be out of the house today and got some nice photos (at least i think) c&c welcome
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    #3 and #8 are my favorite! I love how you made the texture really pop in these, and the angles in #3 are great ( to my eye at least.) Good job! :)
     
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    thank you! i had a bit of fun taking these. me and a friend were in an olddd barn lol. the ones with the big circles are taken from the bottom of a silo pretty creepy too lol
     
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    You did a wonderful job of turning what was probably a dirty, old, somewhat ugly/creepy barn into some creative and intriguing shots. One of the things I love about photography- the ability to take the mundane, things people my overlook, and turn it into something amazing just by viewing it with a creative eye:)
     
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    mhm! thanks for the compliments
     
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    love the gears composition, but it is underexposed...id like to see it with exposure bumped up and maybe some levels and contrast play. :thumbup:

    nice series.
     
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    Thanks, I did quite a bit of pp on it and that's the best I could get it with a quick fix up. But I agree its a little too dark
     
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    Great job with lines on #1!
    #2 cant really tell what the subject is. I think its the spider web but for all of it to be in focus you would need a higher f/stop.
    #3 has some great colors and nice lighting.
    #4-7 need a little more work on composition.
    #8 is a good pic. But maybe keep the vignetting down a little more.
     
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    1 3 and 8 are great. I agree with redtippmann i noticed the vignette right away.
     
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    Yeah it wasn't that dark before I uploaded it haha. Thanks tho guys!
     
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    I like #s 2 & 4. You have a great eye.
     
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    Awww haha. Thank you
     

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