Several pics for cc

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by El2, Nov 14, 2008.

  1. El2

    El2 TPF Noob!

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    Thanks. I just uploaded these pictures. It's been a while. I appreciate any CCs.

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  2. chrisburke

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    not bad... in the first one.. the background colors are pretty bland.. I know they arent the focus of the picture, but a dead (color wise) background kills it for me. Second one isnt bad, has a few hot spots in the bottom corners and on her shirt (i believe this is common with brightly colored shirts, so beware of that in the future... third one.. pretty much a mix of the 2 problems i mentioned... dead BK colors.. and some hot spots...

    all in all, pretty good shots, just work on those colors... what mode was your camera in when you shot them?
     
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    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I don’t like the composition in #2. It seems like a snapshot of the woman with a rock, so I’m not sure what your main focus of the picture is…the rock, or her.

    I do like the perspective of #3. Down low, looking up, nice choice. I also like her smile in here, it looks more natural.
    I may have tried to move her slightly to the left (her right) so that her head may be framed by the two trees behind her. With the tree behind her, it kinda makes her hair fade into the background.

    Great focus on the shots. Things are sharp. I also love the colour of her shirt, adds a lot of radiance to a very radiant smile.
     
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    It was on manual mode, focus is on one shot. I didn't shoot in Raw, just large jpeg.

    Thanks for the comments!
     

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