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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Jankster, Jan 9, 2010.

  1. Jankster

    Jankster TPF Noob!

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    this is a shot of my mom and my little sister. we went on a walk earlier today. i just wandered around shooting while my mom talked to my sister about life...i liked this one. C&C is always welcome. Thanks for looking!

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    I think the title is over the top because it tells what is in your mind and the shot itself doesn't carry it off. There is no sense of connection between the two people and a title of 'Angry Walk' would be just as appropriate.

    In therms of the picture itself, it feels a little cramped side to side. I think including enough more at the sides to see the handrails at their position would take away that cramped feeling.

    Also this would be better cropped 4 x 5 down to teh top of the tree on the left side. As it is there is this empty white space on the top and the tension just slides out that way.

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    thank you for your input i appreciate it
     

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