She Demanded a Serious Portrait

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  1. dan.rpo

    dan.rpo TPF Noob!

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    Not really crazy about the lighting here, and the bug bites on her shoulders should be retouched. I think that I'd have used a bit of fill-flash on this shot as well to give her hair some added details.
     
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    It's OK but editing out the marks as mentioned would be a plus. The background is good... except for the car; my eyes keep drifting to it.
     
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    shes a pretty girl/lady, and there are alot of possibilities with here for sure, just dont like the shot,angle of the shot, exposure or backround here, ask her to work with you again, I'd like to see more of her
     
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    ^shes the gf...shes more than willing to work with me anyday, anytime!
     

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