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  1. JohnMF

    JohnMF TPF Noob!

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    Can i have your opinions on this photo. Do you think i should clone out the twigs on the right?

    any other comments welcome, thanks

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  2. tempra

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    yes is the simple answer, or if you have chance, retake it and get someone to pull them out of the way - and maybe put the aerial straight on the radio as well so it goes with the lines.

    Thats just my opinion of course
     
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    Maybe not the twigs, but how about the TV or radio in the window?
     
  4. JohnMF

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    yes, i will take the pic again like tempra says and this time remove the radio like you say mountain. I didnt even notice the radio there when i took the photo :( not very observant of me!

    Might try and get someones reflection in the glass this time

    thanks people
     
  5. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Yes, let someone hold the nice forsytiae-twigs out of the photo, get rid of the radio of that wasn't meant to be part of your composition, and don't try to catch any reflections in the glass. Or try for one and take another without them to compare. I think I'd prefer the orderliness and simplicity of a photo with just the window, the timber frames and the logs - same angle, same framing.
     
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    twigs out! leave the radio there!!! it adds something to the shot. I think that "radioless" shot would be boring :p
     
  7. JohnMF

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    thanks for the comments everyone.

    The timber on the shed reminded me slightly of something similar to a mondrian painting, link below if anybodys interested

    http://www.artmuseums.harvard.edu/mondrian/

    ended up cropping the leaves out completely and cloning the radio out, and then went a bit mental with the colours

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  8. meotter

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    i liked it better with the radio, but would have set the antenna straight as was suggested earlier. the radio was so perfect there :)

    i liked the first shot with no twigs best :)
     

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