She's Dead

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  1. sillyphaunt

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    Critiques? Ideas? Better perspectives?
     
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    Hmm...nice idea...but I dont like the feet, because even though I know its a doll...its to plasticy...perhaps try doing a view from a diagonal? you know, looking at its face from the side? and convert it to black and white :)
     
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    She needs a toe tag :)
     
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    the color looks off a bit on the magenta side...as for the subject, the dof is a good idea, but the feet are not much to look at--they are plain and smooth. its kind of funny though
     
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    Hey!~ idea was there but the proportion wasn't really clear...
    i was looking at the picture and was wondering if the 'LEg' on the extreme right belongs to the same doll? if so, then the head seemed a little displaced...
    Perhaps, to clear the air, you could change the perspective? just a suggestion though!~ PEACE!~
     
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    good idea, i like the parallels with pictures of deceased humans... but the doll's feet are just too abstract to look like feet. they look like... a fruit or smthng. perhaps with some more clues as to the rest of the doll it'd help.
     
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    Thats just wrong.
     
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    dof? down on floor?
     
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    dof = depth of field

    hehe... but maybe he meant down on floor ;)
     

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