Shoes and Skateboard

[Chadfehr]

Got bored in my basement so i snapped this, lemme know what you think.

 

[KmH]

I think you had a good concept, but it's poorly executed.

I think a brighter exposure is needed, the skateboard should be in focus and there should be less vertical open space between the 2 in the image.

 

[dak1b]

underexposed...

 

[Knawx]

I like where you're going with this, but I agree with the exposure comments.

Also I would lower the angle of the shot, and I actually like the board being out of focus.

 

[jamagica]

I hate to always be a rebel, but the underexposure is actually OK here...I think if it was brighter, the overall tone of the shot would be pretty cold. I like how it feels "warm" from the exposure level. In respect to composition, i would have added some space at the bottom in order to compensate for the wide gap between the two subjects