Shoes and Skateboard

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Chadfehr, Jul 24, 2009.

  1. Chadfehr

    Chadfehr TPF Noob!

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    Got bored in my basement so i snapped this, lemme know what you think.

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  2. KmH

    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    I think you had a good concept, but it's poorly executed.

    I think a brighter exposure is needed, the skateboard should be in focus and there should be less vertical open space between the 2 in the image.
     
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    underexposed...
     
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    I like where you're going with this, but I agree with the exposure comments.

    Also I would lower the angle of the shot, and I actually like the board being out of focus.
     
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    I hate to always be a rebel, but the underexposure is actually OK here...I think if it was brighter, the overall tone of the shot would be pretty cold. I like how it feels "warm" from the exposure level. In respect to composition, i would have added some space at the bottom in order to compensate for the wide gap between the two subjects
     

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