Shoot at the Train Station

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  1. twocolor

    twocolor No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Here's my latest family shoot. The pictures were taken at a local train museum.

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    3. Just realized I cut off her toe - DANG IT!
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    5. Not loving her hand placement here . . .
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    please feel free to give constructive critique!!!
     
  2. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nice set. The one thing that I would want to be different, would be to have the children looking at the camera/viewer in shots 2 & 3. It looks like they are looking off-camera...probably at the mother. Again in #6, the little girl is looking away.

    I think it works in the last one, as they are both looking well off camera and in the same direction.
     
  3. visualpoetry

    visualpoetry TPF Noob!

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    Nice work! What a great location. My favorites 1-3.
     
  4. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Agree with Big Mike's comments on the eyes, additionally, the little girl's disembodied fingers around the back of her mother's neck (#6) bother me a little, however other than that, great work!
     

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