Shot for C&C

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  1. dark_shadow

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    Just wondering what you guys thought. Thanks for looking.
     
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    I think it's a really interesting concept, but I would like to see it a little lighter.
     
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    Actually I do like the darkness of it, but get distracted by the horizon, which is not level. Besides the crooked horizon, I really like this shot!
     
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    Great picture. I am new to this but my only comment was I was a little distracted by the blurred background at the top, it kept pulling my eye away from the leaf. Other than that I really like it.
     
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    Too much in the bokeh. Crop? Or... do position it so you'd still have the bokeh, just not as much in it to look at.
     
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    Did a recrop, hopefully its better this time. Let me know what you think. Thanks
     
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    I like it a lot better now! There you go :3
     
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    Thank you :D
     
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    I like that one a lot better.
     
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    Thank you for all your comments
     
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    Well done, good use of selective coloring. I like the placement of the leaf in the frame.
     
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    Thank you for all of your comments.

    I guess I had a liking for leaves that day, and I found some more.

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    Looking for more C&C. Thanks
     

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