Shotguns, Abs, Shadows

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by MyNameIsChris, Oct 28, 2008.

  1. MyNameIsChris

    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    I'd say that sums this set of pictures up. C&C please!

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    Thanks for looking, C&C!
     
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    Lyncca TPF Noob!

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    I like 2 and 3. One has a lot of red (the background even looks pink) and a halo around him (or you?)

    I really like the lighting on the third.
     
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    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    C'mon, I usually get more people to respond than this. Tell me how horrible they are if you don't have anything good to say about them! Any criticism is better than none.
     
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    Yemme No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I like them. I really love the last one I just wish there was more darkness covering the left side of your face. It's hot.
     
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    i like them all but the second one kinda makes you look like a hunch back. I think that if you did #1 like the #3 that would be pretty neat
     
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    I'd hate to see the guy lose an eye in #1. With a 12ga. (Mossberg 500?) not shouldered like he has it in #1, it's a good way of getting hurt. This picture would probably be more acceptable with some sort of nature background. Otherwise, maybe cleaning the gun, checking to make sure it's clear...something like that...

    #2 More shadowing and different lighting? Maybe it's the green that's throwing me off...Something just doesn't seem right but it's not too bad.

    #3 Lighting is great, it even gives some depth between the background and the subject (unlike in #1 ).
     
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    Thanks everybody, I appreciate it!
     
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    I really like the look, did you do any pp if so, can you say what you did to them?
     
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    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    Mostly dodge/burn on a grey layer above it set to overlay and some contrast adjustments.
     
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    I like the 1st image WITHOUT that killing tool.
    Why don't you compose something positive in your beautiful sorroundings!
     
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    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    Uhh, troll? Also, "positive" is a relative term.
     
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    LOVE the first one














    -Mike
     

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