Shots for site, please cc

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  1. ga_shooter

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    I've been busy getting things ready for the site launch(s) and had my husband take a photo for the about section. They are real estate sites, so i wanted it to look a little like that kind of shot. I need feedback. To me the eyes seem wonky because i had to do some work with the cloning tool on the pupils.

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    My honest opinion...lose the lipstick. It makes you look older. Lipgloss without any colouring would probably help.

    Other than that it looks good. Though I do see what you mean about the eyes.
     
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    I think it's a great shot for what you're using it for. Nice warm feeling.
     
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    Thats really funny! The worst part is, that is lip gloss. Maybe I'm just getting old?
     
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    Thank you for the feedback.
     
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    Hi GS.....

    I tried a few things.....cropped the left side and top a bit to show you off, cloned out the item on the left side, burned and dodged the lamp, and applied some levels to give more depth.

    Hope it helps.....


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    This is excellent, much better. Thank you!
     
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    Here is my shot at it.

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    Nice shot, though I do agree about the eyes. They just don't seem to be connecting to the camera. Do you have one eye which is lower than the other, like me?

    Marian
     
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    I do! Most people look at me like I'm crazy when i tell them that my face is crooked, but it's true. Do you think i should try a different shot so that it's not so obvious? I liked the ones from this side because the background is so much better. Buit I have some shots from the other side that aren't so "off " in the eyes.
     
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    This one is good too. I like how bright the face is in this one, but it feels like the background is too saturated?
     

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