Shots from my roof.

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  1. TaylorTPhotography

    TaylorTPhotography TPF Noob!

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    (1)Self portrait. This one took so many tries since I used a self timer >.<

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    (2)A friend of mine.

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    (3)I'm still not sure if I like this picture.

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    So, what do you guys and girls think?

    (Yes, I know I'm on the younger side.:confused:)
     
  2. The Phototron

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    A tighter crop for the first one, and get rid of the frame, it's ugly to be awfully frank.

    I like the lighting in number two.
     
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    I like them:) #1 has a great pose but I wish it was a little sharper. ( Was it that windy out?:)

    #2 is a good idea and looks very nice. But still not as sharp as I would like.
    #3 is a little fuzzy for my liking but still not bad.

    What camera was used?
     
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    #1 is good but I agree with photorton about the frame.

    #2 I like alot. could it be sharper? Yea but its still good.

    #3 would be the best if it were sharp. Its a interesting pose and I just like the feel of it.

    But what do I know!
     
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    I like the last one. I'm going to differ with the others on this one though, I LIKE the out of focus look. It's like a memory or a dream or something.
     
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    I love the lighting in the first one
     
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    1. lovely picture, can be cropped a bit more.
    2. Very lolita! Great work with the natural light. Nice Capture, my favorite.
    3. More definition needed, maybe changing this to b&w would help.
     
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    great work. I wish I had taken my photography more seriously at your age.
     
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    3# is so beautiful~~
    just like a dream! Why you not sure??
     
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    3 is my favorite one
     

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