Shots of my kiddo

Airborne_Guy

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Here are some shots of my kiddo.
A little LR action added to them. I guess maybe composition critique is what im looking for, but anything will help. TIA
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Feedback from another newb ;)

It looks like there's too much lightroom action going on. Some of the colours are just odd. Some vignettes a little to obvious.
Every on is landscape format. Try portrait and you'll get more of your kid in shot.
Number 2 looks a little over-exposed.
The focus looks good.
Depth of field looks good too.
You got down to his level, which is very good :thumbup:
 
Photo image #1 is my favorite. #2, I agree is a little odd in colorization. Great focus and depth! But remember, rules can be broken and opinions vary. Keep it up and I look forward in seeing more!
 
1 and 2 the skin looks like plastic. Doesn't have any detail or texture. #4 is GREAT.
 
i like the composition the coloring is interesting but i kinda like it... the last one i feel sorry for the little guy. it reminds me of when i was very young and very gullible and my older brother had me look into the hose to see were the water went as he turned it on and completely soaked me... I can laugh at it now but i hated him for a while for it... man those were the days...
 
i dont like the pp in 2, but love it in 3....im not sure why
 
Thanks for the feedback. I was just messing with the tones. But as far as composition goes, Im trying to work on it. Most of the shots were luck since its hard to keep him still! But again, thanks for all the feedback!
 
The last one is hilarious. A bit much on the PP for my taste for the others.
 

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