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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by paulk_68, Feb 23, 2009.

  1. paulk_68

    paulk_68 TPF Noob!

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    Yup, another picture from Romania...

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    paulk_68 TPF Noob!

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    So I'm guessing that no response means that it sucks.
     
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    Torus34 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Nothing wrong with the basic composition.

    But when my eye is drawn to the backlit opening there seems to be a figure standing(?) there. I can't be sure. It's annoying.

    If you wished to include a figure, one descending or ascending the steps would have been preferable. Black garb would have added impact. Traditional garb would have added a sense of timelessness to the scene, whilst modern would have added contrast.

    Hopefully, you can re-visit the scene. It offers promise. Watch tonal range, though. The darks may be blocked.
     
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    Yes , The stairs ,the hand rail and the roof ledge are all wonderfull lines leading you to the bright area in the sun beems. A wonderfull composition needing contrast. A stop less exposure and or a little post.

    An element going up the stair to the light would be cool.
     
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    I cannot see the picture...
     
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