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Discussion in 'Landscape & Cityscape' started by vwkid45, Sep 19, 2006.

  1. vwkid45

    vwkid45 TPF Noob!

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  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nice idea.
    Too much black at the bottom, though, I think.
    And either my eye-sight is leaving me (which would not be surprising) or I can't really see ANY part of your photo in focus *adjusts glasses* ... still can't... So sorry.
    And the pic is a little tilted.
    Tell us a bit more about how you took it and what you had in mind when you planned this, will you?
     
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    the focus is at the edge of the waterfall i think it is just that the image is really soft with a rather small dof (what aperture were you on? because a small f-number would explain maybe both the dof and the softness). The black is cool but yes there is a bit too much of it.
    Apart from those technicalities i think you did pretty good with black and white and a nice conception.
     

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