~ Silly Composition for C&C ~

[rateeg]

Hey folks.
Just used a tripod and timer on this shot.
PP and cropped.
Which one do you guys think looks good between the two?
And is my PP alright?

Thanks for the comments.

#1

#2

 

[lildlege1]

Wow!!! I like the look and I like the first one better thats just me.

 

[lildlege1]

What is below her right breast is it a spot or am I missing something?

 

[Trever1t]

I like the concept but not the processing.
The shot's too 'flat' for my taste, perhaps a larger aperture?

 

[Robin Usagani]

the unprocessed image is probably not properly exposed and needed additional lighting on the subject. You probably really bumped up the fill light slider? I really hate the sky. I do love the concept though. Maybe pretend to give her a violation ticket?

 

[altitude604]

youv'e got a lot of halos around buddys' legs which i find kind of distracting. the second crop i prefer more than the first.

 

[jake337]

take out that light pole opn the right

 

[o hey tyler]

I'd photoshop out the woman's stray lactation. I noticed it as well.

The shot doesn't make too much sense. You have a lot of effort put into the costume of the female, but the captain's hat/auto mechanic's shirt/cargo short combo doesn't have the cohesiveness it needs.

 

[manaheim]

Absolutely fantastic. Creative and silly. Definitely made me chuckle. May not hang on the wall of the louvre, but I totally see what you're doing and I think you pretty well nailed it. I wouldn't change a thing. Like the crop in the second one better, btw.

 

[sobolik]

It is a corny dud? of a photo. It would be a cool winner if you put fake rabbit ears and a pair of sunglasses with fake mustache on the dog.

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

Of the 2, I prefer the second...

 

[rateeg]

Thanks guys for the crits and comments.
This shot was not planned that's why our outfit is weird.

We'll try our best next time, it's hard being a newbie.


I agree with the dog suggestion, we need to put a bunny ears and a moustache.

 

[rateeg]

Btw, added the sky and adjusted some things...
sky looks fake though but that's the best i can do.

Thanks again everyone for the inputs.

 

[RauschPhotography]

The post processing isn't working for me, sorry.

 

[Framer]

I like the surreal overall look. I second the idea of removing that light pole, its worse now with the new sky. I wonder what the officer is looking for and thats distracting to me. I would have the officer give the dog a ticket. I don't mean any disrespect to your lady friend!